One MASSIVE edit later…
Maybe I was a little previous in suggesting that I had ‘finished’ Making Whoopee when I last updated this news blog. I assumed in that optimistic, post-delivery glow that the first draft was quite the most brilliant masterpiece ever.
Not quite true… For a start, the manuscript towered as high as a shoebox on my desk because it was so very loooong – and that was printing two pages per sheet. Eeek! There was a cast of hundreds, plus horses and dogs, some of whom I had clearly forgotten I’d ever invented by the time I wrote the end of the book, because they got ‘lost’ en route there. And I’d got my many tight and interwoven plots in such a twist that at times there was just far too much going on at once – a great carnival of hunky men, girls in love, marriages in peril, event horses flying fences left right and centre, oodles of seductions, high farce and low morals. It all needed calming down a bit. Writing through the night with two small toddlers to look after and a secondary business to run by day can make for a somewhat dizzying take on life, and I knew I owed it to my readers to unravel it all and knit it back together more tightly.
Hence a very long, tricky edit has ensued from early September. I ground five pencils down to stubs scribbling changes here, there and everywhere, constantly sharpening and rubbing out. Throughout October, my eraser crumbs and vast floating paper mountains infuriated passengers on overcrowded trains the length and breadth of Britain as I dashed around to literary festivals, where I must have waffled on in a demented fashion about ‘the writing process’ while pencil shavings fell from my pockets. In the end, I hid myself away far from family and friends for a week’s isolation to finish the edit in a non-stop marathon of eighteen hour days, which has put the book into much better shape. I’ve just read it again and - phew – can happily declare that it far less confusing, although still in need of a lot of loving pruning, and I want to create at least one more draft. I’m taking a short break to vacuum up the pencil crumbs before starting that but, trust me, this one will be perfected, tightened and ready to roll as soon as possible. With so many familiar characters in there from previous books, I want to make sure I get it absolutely right and that readers old and new are caught up in the action from the start.
At home, the family is thriving on fresh Somerset air and busy lives – Dora, now almost three, is the storyteller, who delights in acting out very long narratives involving vast numbers of animals, and at eighteen months, Winnie is the action-lover who clambers aboard her rocking horse at every opportunity and pelts back and forth like Pippa Funnell on a mission. Thanks to word getting out about how good he is, Sam’s teaching schoolmaster dressage lessons non-stop, with new clients phoning each week, even amid this the wild weather and the ever-shortening days. The horses here are fabulous, and Sam makes it such fun to get it right and try out all those flashy moves. Being so in demand makes it hard for him to find time to ride his competition horses, but we know that the work-life balance will get there eventually, just as I daydream of liberating my lovely mare from her woolly coat and mud and exploring the local lanes with the girls in tow on shaggy Shetlands. It will happen!
For now, my mind is all wrapped up with Tash and Hugo, Faith and Rory and the new characters in Making Whoopee that I have been living with for the past year and who I’m now rather reluctant to let go…
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